Storygram #193
She was old enough to know that her parents didn’t want her on the shore alone…
She was old enough to know that her parents didn’t want her on the shore alone…
How to keep your readers awake during your story.
Your story is snuffed out before it even began… But you can change that.
John Wayne was a family member who we met along the way.
He flipped the last light switch down, and the whole factory became pitch black. This company took him a decade to get off the ground, and now, he might never get the chance to turn on its lights again.
His father always gave him the same answer about the pipes, but it always made his curiosity stronger than ever. As they passed the pipe, a light suddenly poured out of it. “Dad, look! Look!”